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Cotton Candy Sky
by Jacki M ButlerThe sky is glowing
At the oceanic horizon
Starting off a soft blue
Fading into a cotton candy pink
Then almost white before becoming
A brilliant blue high about me
Streaked with small puffs of clouds
And early signs of stars
And in moments it has all gone away 08/05/2007 Posted on 08/12/2007
Copyright © 2024 Jacki M Butler
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 08/13/07 at 01:19 AM Beautiful descriptions and imagery.... taking the reader right along with you, allowing us to view through your eyes. Aloha to you and yours from this side of paradise.. alisa ;-) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/13/07 at 04:22 AM Wonderful images here and sky over the ocean is magic. Thank you. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/14/07 at 01:50 AM Good to see you back (or have I just been negligent?) You draw a vivid and colorful picture of the sky above the ocean. (I lived along the Atlantic Ocean for three months this past winter.) |
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