| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/07/07 at 11:30 PM Much to ponder in this brief but poignant and symbolic poem. (Not rating but this is an effective and expressive poem.) |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/08/07 at 02:54 AM I love those last four lines. Just a really, really cool image. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/08/07 at 02:26 PM rot sinks the foundation —oh how true. (and right before the very eyes, how ironic)
The whole poem has an omen feel about it. High quality, Aaron. High quality indeed. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/09/07 at 06:25 PM Strong thoughts about life, in general, and I sense this relates also to how you phrase your occupation on your home page here.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Maria Kintner on 08/18/07 at 01:02 AM that's such a completely honest thought. |
| Posted by Pall Kvaran on 08/20/07 at 01:26 PM Congratulation on the potd. The title got my attention, like it. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/20/07 at 03:00 PM wooohooooo!!!! CONGRATULATIONS Aaron with being the poet of the day!!!! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/20/07 at 06:36 PM The sun is shining bright this day! ;)
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| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 08/20/07 at 06:47 PM Wonderful to see this as POTD. Hope all is well with you! Congrats, Aaron! |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 08/20/07 at 08:34 PM Wonderful poem for a POTD. Good to see you on this rainy day. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/20/07 at 09:41 PM WOOO HOOOOO! CONGRATULATIONS on POTD! Sending the YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYs back to you, my friend. ;-)
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 08/20/07 at 09:52 PM I like the phrasing you used, giving familar words a new spin by rearranging it seems..."stacking the new
over old and dusty is
just easy
neat" yes neat, and very, very cool. Well deserved POTD. smh
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