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by Andrew S Adamsi am but water
waiting silently beneath
these troubled bridges. 08/04/2007 Posted on 08/04/2007
Copyright © 2025 Andrew S Adams
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 08/04/07 at 09:13 AM An appropriate Ku for Minneapolis. Well done. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Seago on 08/05/07 at 07:41 AM I absolutely adore this. Simplistic, yet eloquent. I'm adding this to my favorites. And I plan to poke around your library a bit more. :) |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 08/08/07 at 12:08 AM Unsettling and haunting, Andrew - a first-rate haiku! d:-) |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/14/10 at 03:56 PM oh. to be water, how wonderful it would be... great haiku! |
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