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The L Word

by Dave Fitzgerald

Him. I love you!
Her. No you don't!
Him. I would if you'd let me!
But you won't.

Her. You don't understand,
That I really love you.
Him. You won't let me.
Love you too.

07/25/2007

Posted on 07/25/2007
Copyright © 2024 Dave Fitzgerald

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alisa Js on 07/25/07 at 01:52 AM

!! lol !! Isn't this the truth? Sometimes we can't win for losing in the realm of love.... !!! lol !!! alisa ;-)

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 07/26/07 at 12:59 AM

this is great...and i love your rhyming and rhythm as always.

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 07/26/07 at 03:56 AM

Ahhhh, the "L" word. So confusing yet so wonderful when it all works out.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/26/07 at 11:58 AM

The conversation here rings so true and cracked me up! I too enjoyed the rhyming and rhythm of this. Great job

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