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laughter is not the best medicine

by Ava Blu

the Chinese neighbors are sitting on the balcony
playing a game we do not recognize

making interesting noises,
clink cllllllink woooooooooo
clliinkkkk

baker makes fun of them, calls them origami people
(origami makes me think of bees)

i laugh

i do not find it funny
i do not understand
if i do not laugh, baker will ask why and i do not have the energy to fight

we are friends, barely
he is rarely around

mutual understanding
don’t touch me and i won’t slap you

cllllinkkkk woooooooo clllinnkkk

he laughs hysterically

tomorrow at work he will tell this story
he will exaggerate and they’ll all laugh

not knowing the price of those laughs

and their kids will some day come home,
after learning about origami

just the syllables in the word
will send shivers

as their children begin to laugh
they will recognize
how far they fell

i will not be able to smile though,
even when the realization becomes a thickener in the air

for i once went along,
never innocent,
with all the wrong things.

07/23/2007

Author's Note: "bee season" - i believe that's the name of the movie with richard gere. it's quite interesting.

Posted on 07/24/2007
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/24/07 at 03:50 AM

Hi Jeanna, I can see why, after reading this. I can see why you were so upset. I had to look that word up in the ditionary. What it says is; the Japenese art of folding paper to form flowers, animals figures. But, from what I gather, it's nothing nice the what he's thinking or using it. I wanted you to know, that: Laughter is the best medicine: If it's used in the right ways. Not making fun of poeple. You're surely right, that's what he was doing, making fun of them. They have their own ways of doing things.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 07/24/07 at 01:24 PM

cruel humor doesn't produce laughter but a sound that always makes me think of someone's soul trying to escape from the ugliness surrounding it. the complex simplicity of origami is way beyond the understanding of some ignorant people. i enjoyed this poem a great deal. thank you for reminding me that i am not alone in my disgust of cruel humor.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/24/07 at 05:17 PM

I enjoyed reading this very much - gave me the willies how you followed this from cause to assumption to sharing to perpetuating. I appreciate the author's note.

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 07/24/07 at 05:26 PM

. been there - laughed with, and laughed at. and have felt the guilt that comes from it. In cases such as this, laughter is poison.

Posted by Anita Mac on 07/25/07 at 07:44 PM

I often feel the same way. I like this, the way you look into the future knowing at least some part of it. Nice. ;o)

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/05/09 at 03:56 PM

This has such an addicting creativity to it. Just wonderful.

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