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The Little Girl Behind the Tree
by Ann MillsOnce I saw a little girl
Hide behind a tree.
I looked at her and smiled
and she smiled back at me!
She laughed and hid and laughed some more;
She had the greatest time.
When I looked again, she wasn't there,
But her smile laughs in my mind. 07/15/2007 Posted on 07/16/2007
Copyright © 2025 Ann Mills
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/16/07 at 02:00 AM Hi Ann,
This is lovely, sweet. The little girl is surely fast. That's great her smile and laughs are still with you. She made you smile. :) |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/16/07 at 02:01 AM Also Welcome to Pathetic. :) |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 07/16/07 at 03:19 AM Hi Ann! I enjoyed your application and this poem you submitted. Please don't worry about posting your darker stuff, there's even a category just for that. Quite a selection on Pathetic. Welcome! |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 07/16/07 at 06:58 PM Well done... and welcome to Pathetic! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/18/07 at 02:37 PM Hello Beautiful. Congratulations for joining and being accepted into this great website. I just happen to know that you wrote this poem when you were TEN YEARS OLD! Amazing. I look forward to many more of your poems on this website. I am sorry I didn't get to "vote" on your application. I would have liked reading it I am sure. As I have told you, I look forward to discovering Ann, in her darkness and he light. Thank you for trusting us with your poetry. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 07/22/07 at 01:34 PM I liked the meter and the end to a poem that makes me think of someone having a flashback! lol |
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