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she sees me naked ...

by Charlie Morgan

while i write until feelings are coral;
cutting to the innocent touch of others.

i talk of eyes, youth, love and longing,
she grins a thousand-yard smile; i wince.

a love traceable only to itself is alone
in the cold vacuum of worldly existence.

i walk in front of her for notice, any;
a grin from her is a blue plate special.

the calendar beats my memory of sixty;
days are to be spent on youthfulness.

a deserved rest is a summer rainbow;
at it's end, a feeling of accomplishment.

06/28/2007

Posted on 06/28/2007
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Timothy Somers on 06/29/07 at 04:00 AM

Charlie, I love this one. Thanks for the read.

Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 07/01/07 at 11:11 PM

I thought you were going to write something about your family pet! (chuckle) RCat

Posted by Kristine Briese on 07/08/07 at 06:27 PM

This is a wonderful poem. Thanks, Charlie.

Posted by JD Clay on 07/08/07 at 06:54 PM

Great poetics, Charlie! This poignant piece exudes metaphoric speak and deserves top honors. Congratulations! On becoming The Au Naturel Poet Of The Day.

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 07/08/07 at 09:54 PM

Beautiful poem. I smiled ear to ear when I read it. Congratulations on your POTD. Well deserved.

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