| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Patricia J Reed on 06/22/07 at 05:04 AM I like this one - It has a relaxing and homey feel to it
:)
Patti |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 06/22/07 at 11:40 AM oh, i have used an onion to mask my tears before. this carries a lot in so few words. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/23/07 at 05:43 PM I see her. I can see the slow slow movements, and feel the salt run down my own cheeks, alongside her I witness. Quietly. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/24/07 at 01:23 AM A word picture strikingly clear with emotional undertones. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 06/25/07 at 01:27 AM Interesting metaphor for life and memories.. aloha |
