by Kyle Anne Kish

drifting in her thoughts
she peels the onion slowly-
summer storm


Posted on 06/22/2007
Copyright © 2021 Kyle Anne Kish

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Patricia J Reed on 06/22/07 at 05:04 AM

I like this one - It has a relaxing and homey feel to it :) Patti

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 06/22/07 at 11:40 AM

oh, i have used an onion to mask my tears before. this carries a lot in so few words.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/23/07 at 05:43 PM

I see her. I can see the slow slow movements, and feel the salt run down my own cheeks, alongside her I witness. Quietly.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/24/07 at 01:23 AM

A word picture strikingly clear with emotional undertones.

Posted by Alisa Js on 06/25/07 at 01:27 AM

Interesting metaphor for life and memories.. aloha

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