|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Patricia J Reed on 06/22/07 at 05:04 AM|
I like this one - It has a relaxing and homey feel to it
|Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 06/22/07 at 11:40 AM|
oh, i have used an onion to mask my tears before. this carries a lot in so few words.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/23/07 at 05:43 PM|
I see her. I can see the slow slow movements, and feel the salt run down my own cheeks, alongside her I witness. Quietly.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/24/07 at 01:23 AM|
A word picture strikingly clear with emotional undertones.
|Posted by Alisa Js on 06/25/07 at 01:27 AM|
Interesting metaphor for life and memories.. aloha