| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 06/10/07 at 02:45 PM Cool concrete poem. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/10/07 at 04:00 PM Such a strong, almost swirling flow to this up above to " forsake the conflict and the strife the living lies that pass for life"!!! |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 06/10/07 at 08:54 PM This just races. I like the inclusion of the almost-pleading. "take us take us..." |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 06/10/07 at 09:52 PM The form, like geese flying along with the long wild swoop of words with Yeatsian echoes moves me from afar and "take(s) me with you. It is a brave poem as well, hovering on the imperceptible edge of life and above the "strife" looking in all directions into the known and unknown. Breathtaking. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/14/07 at 01:23 PM This is my new hymn, my friend. |
