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you look better in a hoodie

by Morgan D Hafele

i tend to forget the sun
or that i live in the middle of the desert.
i quit smoking two days ago
and i can't seem to shake
your smell
off of
my body.

damn i wish
it would snow.

05/31/2007

Author's Note:
because i can't take this heat,
or your breath
on the back of my neck

Posted on 06/01/2007
Copyright © 2024 Morgan D Hafele

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anita Mac on 06/01/07 at 03:12 AM

Distractions. Nice bit... and way to quit smoking... again?

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/04/07 at 07:32 PM

Full of irony; wishing it would snow in Alaska. I like also how it's described as a desert which can be quite true especially in winter.

Posted by Jolie Jordan on 02/19/08 at 04:37 AM

Nice. I just found your library :]

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