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Another Poem about the Moon

by Bruce W Niedt

 But it can't be helped.
 Tonight it is so clear,
 so huge, so magnified
 it takes up half the sky.
 
 We can see every crater,
 every mare, every mons.
 We can pick a landing site from here
 
 We can almost walk there,
 without the benefit
 of rocket propulsion.
 
 Or it can come a little closer
 and scoop us up
 like a shiny ladle.
 
 We will land in a cloud
 of slow gray dust
 and trampoline in slo-mo
 
 in our bulky white moonsuits
 or nothing at all,
 (this is a fantasy, you know)
 
 playing golf,
 driving a ball like a star
 over the short horizon
 
 planting stiff little flags
 that seem to snap in imaginary wind
 and come from no particular country.
 
 Then we'll turn around
 and admire the big bright earthrise
 so clear we can see
 
 every mountain, every sea,
 every lake and city
 almost as if we were there.
 
 And that
 is when I will slip
 your hand into mine.

05/22/2007

Author's Note: [First published in Sunken Lines, Winter 2005.]

Posted on 05/23/2007
Copyright © 2024 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 05/23/07 at 04:34 AM

Very nice. I like how it comes full-circle from seeing the details of the moon to seeing the details of the earth.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/23/07 at 01:12 PM

Absolutely wonderful Bruce. Wish I had written this...glad you did. Adds a whole new meaning to "a flight of fancy."

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