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by Travis G Finborg

I am just treading water
more out of instinctual reflex
then any desire to stay afloat

this back and forth
up and down
nasueates

observance of weariness
black and grey waves
white caps washed with rain

my arms cycle with the commands
survive despite

I want to sink

05/12/2007

Posted on 05/12/2007
Copyright © 2024 Travis G Finborg

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 05/12/07 at 10:32 PM

The feeling of just wanting to give up. I have seen it, tasted it, smelled it, Travis. Good poem.

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