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im so emo my poem titles are longer than my hair (its very long)

by Matthew Zangen

dont judge me because you dont know me...

                      blank lines are cool...
my journal is black because it matches my eye liner...
     which is also black...
in it i write in black ink on black paper because i am ashamed of everything...
and my poems are all about "I" "you" and "me"...
     but "you" is never the reader...
     unless you are reading this...
     "you" know who "you" are...
          and i hate you...
nothing else matters but you and me anyway...
when im without you..........

every letter i write my pain turns lowercase...
so you know that my capital letters are as INTENTIONAL as my occasional lackofspaces...
and punctuation is as optional as i am to you...
because i can break lines like you broke my heart...
less...
than...
slash...
three...
iliketopunctuatefor*:orna-ment-ation:*sometimessofuckoff...
i curse because it makes my points *sharper*...
so they stab better like knives to your chest for your betrayal...
     you know how you betrayed me!!!!!!!!11!!!...
you talk about cliche but you are naive like a child...
     i don't care what you think...
     i write to release my emotions...

you make me so mad...
     the end of my poems get really angry...
you hurt me so bad...why?
my hate is like my blood, so ironic it runs outside my veins...
it spilled onto paper to make you see my pain...
     i rhyme because it sounds good...
     not like you...
i don't know why im explaining myself to you anyway...
I HATE YOU even more than I HATE MYSELF...
and that's a lot...

     i hope people like this poem...

04/30/2007

Author's Note: Full title: "im so emo my poem titles are even longer than my hair and thats really long but not longer than the cold dark loneliness of this endless pain you caused me i hate you."

Posted on 04/30/2007
Copyright © 2020 Matthew Zangen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/02/07 at 02:30 PM

...my first matthew zangen poem, ahhhh relaxing in my field of screams...i possess the saaaaame thoughts so don't you be going and claiming them...i love the diatribe o' the human(s) being...eh? btw you don't throw rocks do you?...lovely way you put it out there...peace, chaz

Posted by Erin Jones on 12/14/07 at 03:23 PM

This is great! I love it... Especially the last line, so contradictory. Yes, I bet you knew that. Yeah, it's great... Thanks for making me smile :)

Posted by Sarah Wolf on 10/07/08 at 07:54 PM

I like this... very much... I worship you... I am adding this to my favorites...

Posted by Amy Wustrin on 10/26/08 at 02:12 AM

i second the +favs sentiment. this was awsome!

Posted by Mo Couts on 08/08/11 at 05:05 PM

LOVE the complete title in the author's note; thanks for sharing it with us! And, the poem itself, is awesome, too.

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