if i were a feral woman

by Rowan Luis

With dirt in the corners of my eyes;
I would make love with a deer by cold moonlight,
for they
are the sexiest beasts in the forest


Author's Note: bah. they are quite sexy. could be an alternative life plan... live off the land, mate with a deer, have weird hooved children.

Posted on 04/22/2007
Copyright © 2021 Rowan Luis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 05/01/07 at 03:34 PM

"live off the land, mate with a deer, have weird hooved children"... Ha! That's like totally the norm' in some of the places I've lived. But anyway, nice short piece this is - it made me "think" (which is forgivable just this once). Quite nicely done; kinda disturbing too. ;)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/10/07 at 02:33 PM

I can see that happening with a "feral" woman. One for the "courageous admission" file. :o)

Posted by Cristy M. on 12/06/07 at 02:45 AM

hybrids are sexy.

Posted by Nikki Benson on 05/14/08 at 11:50 PM


Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/09/10 at 03:52 PM

A bearer of Pan-lings! Ah, to dance through the woods and leave the trappings of modern culture behind! Great verse!

Posted by Johnny Crimson on 06/11/10 at 05:32 PM

While the Wolf, perched atop his moon-soaked cliff watches the act with yellow eyes, deciding who would taste sweeter, you or the deer.

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