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Leaves Fall

by Alisa Js

We traveled swift with twisted feet
But reached the same destination,
With star-struck eyes we watched the leaves
Falling in every direction,
Marveling at the veins inside
How they blew apart the pages from our weary, smudge-laced faces ..

Let me turn back here and stay a while
As we stripped away the innards, slow,
How I wished I could inch between
The softness of the layers
And lay right there and fall sleep
For a brief interlude, if not forever
So peaceful was this scene…

04/21/2007

Posted on 04/22/2007
Copyright © 2026 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 04/22/07 at 11:59 AM

Lovely, very descriptive and vivid

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 04/23/07 at 04:01 PM

Alisa, you're right ... great minds DO think alike. This is a beautiful string of words, woven together with a piece of peace at the end. :)

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