| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 04/13/07 at 09:59 AM Non-pretentious and elegantly stated! I loved this. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 04/13/07 at 12:21 PM lovely, just like the dance. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/13/07 at 02:18 PM These simple lines really move me. I like the first person approach. You bring movement and sound and the symbiosis between earth and you to life. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 04/14/07 at 02:00 AM indeed! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/14/07 at 02:26 AM As beautiful as a delicate hula. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 04/18/07 at 02:31 AM Yay Rhonda...I have been dancing all weekend so--this seemed like it was written for me too! I like the centering of this poem... gives a graceful balanced feel to it... as if ready for another spin! |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 04/18/07 at 02:33 AM P.S. We did have hula dancing at the Caltech Dance show... (I was bellydancing)... I took a hula workshop though, and this poem rings true in the earth expression of it...I learned how directly descriptive of natural forces and landscape the hula is! |
