|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 04/09/07 at 04:42 AM|
Ha! Now this is how a love poem is done! I adore it - I shall have to give it my Poem of the Day vote. ;)
|Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/16/07 at 10:22 PM|
this gave me a weird shudder and made me feel kind of warm inside at the same time... should we be worried?
|Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 12/26/07 at 03:09 PM|
kinda gross but loving at the same time...hmmm.
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/26/09 at 12:05 PM|
now there is a surrealist picture as I've ever seen,
wonderfully imagined, and still it has me wondering
what happens to that love when it is fallen out of?
I mean how do you put the one you used to love insanely
back into her peel?
|Posted by Johnny Crimson on 06/11/10 at 05:34 PM|
Be careful, he may return the favor.