| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Cassandra Leigh on 04/08/07 at 12:48 AM ouch... okay, so a good haiku is one that doesn't feel restrained by the small number of syllables and thus small number of words. you definitely manage that. this is gorgeous. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/08/07 at 04:25 PM This is so succinctly expansive. I understand. Lovely, thank you! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/08/07 at 05:19 PM Highly effective; even more so knowing the recent challenges your family faces. I will continue to pray for you and your mom. {{HUGS}} |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/10/07 at 01:18 AM Succinctly an cogently written. (Perhaps many, if not most, can relate to this some period(s) in their lives.) |
