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my baby is koa wood
by Kalikala Smith
hollow bodied baby
c'mon and save me
tell me how to ring out this tune.
oh stringed lover
under my covers
won't you play your sweet sweet song.
your amber color moves me
your subtle curves soothe me
i'm enchanted by your rhythm all night long.
hollow bodied baby
c'mon and save me
please won't you sing me,
oh won't play me,
c'mon and sing me a song.
03/28/2007 Author's Note:
i sleep with my guitar
to let it sing to me
so i can sing back to you
its sweet melody.
Posted on 03/28/2007
Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 03/28/07 at 04:53 AM provacative, sexy and elegant.
i used to sleep with my guitar.
now i fight with it:)
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| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 03/28/07 at 08:50 AM "beautiful music all night long"... Loved this write.
I sleep with my Eeyore..he is soft...and can't play a melody to save either of us. :)
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| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 03/28/07 at 11:41 AM i write lyrics and have been challenged to learn to play the guitar...it may end up in my bed out of my own sheer frustration...loved this! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/28/07 at 02:31 PM Nicely done. I love the "hollow bodied baby" idea and "your subtle curves that soothe me". |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 03/28/07 at 05:48 PM beautiful. and yet another reminder that i should spend more quality time with my guitar. |
| Posted by Jason Moskalyk on 06/21/10 at 09:20 AM Hi Kali! great stuff. |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 07/20/13 at 05:20 PM a very deserving POTD. :) still as superb as it was six years ago. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/20/13 at 08:39 PM Good to see this as POTD! Congrats! |
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