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Extraordinary Evening

by Bethany Lee

Extraordinary evening
Magnificent manifestations
Incomparable intellectual intercourse

Hearts humming together in tune
Souls singing significant songs

This is where we belong
Unified
Smiles signal our openness
Hugs and kisses are bountiful

The good vibrations creating
Champagne showers

Moments of mysticism
Sobhet, so to say.

A sharing of spirit
Everything happens for a reasonÂ…

This is our season,
Shine, baby, shine.


03/15/2007

Posted on 03/26/2007
Copyright © 2021 Bethany Lee

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Scott Utley on 03/26/07 at 04:16 AM

Perfect!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/26/07 at 03:11 PM

Very sweet.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 03/26/07 at 06:32 PM

Incomparable intellectual intercourse...wonderful!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/29/07 at 02:10 PM

Most enjoyable - the alliterations work well - the theme inspiring. I really like the "smiles signal our openness" and the "champaign showers"!

Posted by Kristine Briese on 02/21/11 at 08:05 PM

Beautiful flow; excellent work!

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