| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/05/07 at 02:07 PM Oh, I could write a book! Good candid write...and "I'm willing to discuss" is a nice splash of humor. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 03/05/07 at 06:43 PM why does that happen? I wonder, really I do.. I just posted one titled.. The First Time.. about an incredibly intense and passionate relationship I once had for seven years.... and thinking today, what happened???? lol..lol.. this one hits home.. alisa...;-) |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 03/06/07 at 03:06 AM such a sincere, heartfelt request.. you have put all your cards on the table in a beautifully sad way.. i hope the season of passion returns :) |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 03/06/07 at 05:56 PM You had me at "the inviting smile and smokey eyes" lol Great write |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/07/07 at 04:03 AM Well, this thing certainly does a damn good job of raising that question. Good stuff. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/13/07 at 02:09 PM Hmmmm, yes, the final fade... well done. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/10/07 at 03:46 AM Maybe sometimes being single has it's benefits, but it's sad to hear about something like love fading. That probably hurts worse than loneliness, but in itself, it too is a loneliness that makes one wonder all the more. Too many mysteries attached to losing love. Excellent writing Genevieve.
~Chelle~ |
