Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/21/07 at 10:11 PM Hi Christel. Delightful Ku! Thanks. |
Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/22/07 at 01:33 AM Great imagery in this haiku, Cristel. |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/22/07 at 02:57 AM this is so romantic...sigh. |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/22/07 at 03:31 AM I like the image. Short, very wonderfully captured. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/22/07 at 12:59 PM I really like the power of the word "pierces." Quite effective in helping the reader to visualize the moon and the castle in the clouds. |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/03/07 at 03:38 AM Christel, this is so romantic. Yes, any time the moon is involved, it has to be. Just a whisp of romance to pierce my heart.
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Tim J Bono on 01/18/09 at 08:00 AM "air castle lovers" Crisp. Nice work Crews! The primordial and quintessential love cast and setting. Shalom sister! |
Posted by E. A. Pugh on 01/15/11 at 10:30 PM perfect |