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The Dreamer's Keeper - haiku

by Christel Crews

the moon pierces through
wisps of clouds to shine upon
air castle lovers

02/21/2007

Author's Note: for Lori Blair - here's your piece about nature and love.. a perfect pair, if you ask me! :)

Posted on 02/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/21/07 at 10:11 PM

Hi Christel. Delightful Ku! Thanks.

Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/22/07 at 01:33 AM

Great imagery in this haiku, Cristel.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/22/07 at 02:57 AM

this is so romantic...sigh.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/22/07 at 03:31 AM

I like the image. Short, very wonderfully captured.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/22/07 at 12:59 PM

I really like the power of the word "pierces." Quite effective in helping the reader to visualize the moon and the castle in the clouds.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/03/07 at 03:38 AM

Christel, this is so romantic. Yes, any time the moon is involved, it has to be. Just a whisp of romance to pierce my heart.
~Chelle~

Posted by Tim J Bono on 01/18/09 at 08:00 AM

"air castle lovers" Crisp. Nice work Crews! The primordial and quintessential love cast and setting. Shalom sister!

Posted by E. A. Pugh on 01/15/11 at 10:30 PM

perfect

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