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You - haiku
by Christel Crewsyou are a treasure
standing there, gazing at me
truly i am blessed 02/20/2007
Author's Note: ok, my first and rough attempt at a haiku, so be kind :)
Posted on 02/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/21/07 at 05:26 PM very sweet...and you are blessed. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/22/07 at 04:21 AM Definitely love, and with a gentle touch of a simple words. Is this the one? Here's hoping it grows.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/22/07 at 01:03 PM Simple...poignant. A worthy introduction Christel to this genre of poetry. |
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