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Peace

by Christel Crews

a stream that runs deeper
than the doubts i conjure up
to give me something to
argue over with myself

01/31/2007

Posted on 02/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/21/07 at 05:24 PM

this is beautiful...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/21/07 at 05:24 PM

Nicely touches on the inner struggle(s) we all go through, and how peace wins out in most of us. Aptly expressed Chris!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/21/07 at 07:20 PM

Poignant, Christel. The steam we also need to "let off" once in a while. Excellent.

Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/22/07 at 01:34 AM

Nice theme -- overcoming doubts. Great short piece here.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/22/07 at 04:17 AM

Christel, I'm not sure when I've heard a more beautiful definition of something that can be so elusive, but is right within reach all the time. I've heard many times before that we are our own worst enemy, and what you said here is another way of saying that.
~Chelle~

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