| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/19/07 at 08:27 AM Genevieve, you ahve truly captured the spirit of this art form. The loneliness intensified by that last line. So very well done!! Into my favorites this one. |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/19/07 at 08:47 AM I can't say anything except * it* draws images upon the page in of itself. Lovely. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/19/07 at 03:42 PM This is excellent! That 3rd line definitely captures in metaphor the mood of being alone, with the first two lines setting the stage. Well done!! |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/20/07 at 02:51 PM The daffodil is the national flower of my country. When I see a daffodil, it tells me to go home. Thank you. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 02/20/07 at 08:00 PM such an easy read, yet it fills one with emotion and swarms the heart... its a great haiku! |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 02/22/07 at 10:50 PM so sad but soooooooo true.. thanks for sharing this with us out here... aloha to you from this side of paradise...;-) |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 02/23/07 at 05:57 AM Like everyone said, a really profound write my dear. |
| Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/26/07 at 01:57 AM I think you got them down pat. |
