Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/14/07 at 11:16 PM This made me giggle - I agree with Lori.( hides my scale) |
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/15/07 at 12:11 AM hehehe brilliant... I've been losing my elephant since christmas but i am running 9 miles a week and living off forage |
Posted by A. Paige White on 02/15/07 at 02:09 AM Love the wry sense of humor about it all. Very cutesie. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/15/07 at 02:56 AM haahhaahhaahhahaha - Your ability to laugh at yourself is charming and makes for some mighty fine poems. |
Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 02/15/07 at 09:39 AM Soulo, this is hilarious! I like the rhyme of Thirty and Purty. This reminded me of that movie where Arnold Schwarzenegger is pregnant. HaHa! What an image! ;) |
Posted by Delilah Coyne on 02/15/07 at 07:03 PM I love, love, love this!! And I know the feeling! I'm in the process of losing now! |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/16/07 at 06:10 AM This is exhilirating cheerful. Ooooh I hope your elephant is not the keeper of your sense of humor--I would not want you to lose that! If necessary I will have to send you some of my homemade chocolate chip cookies--I served them at poets night at our house last night. (hee hee)
Wonderful little poem full of delightful silliness! Yay! |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/19/07 at 08:08 PM Oh yes, I've got an elephant too. Soulo, this is a wonderful way to think of losing weight. Thanks for the humorous look at the more serious side of life. And, hey good luck on your safari! ;-)
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Anne Boulender on 02/19/07 at 09:51 PM this is so ridiculously silly. i'm still laughing. |
Posted by Mo Couts on 08/06/11 at 02:18 AM Hehe, this is adorable! I hope your weight loss has come along as you desired! |
Posted by A. Paige White on 04/15/15 at 12:36 PM Congrats on POTD. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/15/15 at 03:17 PM Fun to see this as POTD! Congrats! |
Posted by Steve Michaels on 04/15/15 at 05:53 PM So fun and warm - congrats on POTD! |