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...Sigh...
by Rhonda Maneki
You warm my skin - with that one exhaled breath.
You breathe passion into the moment,
You stroke colours of yearning,
over the flush of desire.
You capture me - draw me into You.
as i drown, I'm granted life anew,
with another sigh from your lips.
02/13/2007
Posted on 02/13/2007
Copyright © 2024 Rhonda Maneki
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/13/07 at 05:38 PM Yes, " ... You capture me - draw me into You.
as i drown, I'm granted life anew,
with another sigh from your lips." It doesn't get any better than that. Perfect title for this poem too. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/13/07 at 06:10 PM Wonderfully well written..... |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/13/07 at 06:36 PM I like those last couple lines, how you tie into the title. Great work. |
| Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 02/14/07 at 12:03 AM I like your choice of words...nicely done |
| Posted by David Neubauer on 02/15/07 at 08:19 AM very nice indeed |
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