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wishes for fishes

by Kyle Anne Kish

perfect ending
perfect day-
let this song live on forever

02/12/2007

Posted on 02/12/2007
Copyright © 2024 Kyle Anne Kish

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/13/07 at 12:46 AM

Dear Ann, this is simplistically beautiful - clean - and lovely. Your song is forever, its the voice you write with.

Posted by Alisa Js on 02/13/07 at 08:20 AM

thanks.. I am a Pisces...lol..

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/13/07 at 04:30 PM

Short, sweet; right to the point. Excellent write!

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/23/07 at 09:34 PM

This little gem of sweetness made me realize that there is a game called "if wishes were fishes"! Instructions read:"catch the fish who will grant the wish you want, throw it back, and you get your wish" ... I think with that in mind, with each day, the song (wish) lives on forever! Nice play with words, and wish!

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