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Rain

by Rhonda Maneki

The sky is painted with a subtle wash of dusky hues
pink and blue, muted within a veil of fog.

A gentle pattering of rain, a moment that is ethereal
As if suspended - just before the thunder.

So quiet -



02/03/2007

Posted on 02/03/2007
Copyright © 2024 Rhonda Maneki

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/03/07 at 06:35 PM

Rhonda, we sure don't get rainstorms like this in SoCal. Maybe I'll have to visit Hawaii to see one. You've captured an emotional moment, being one with nature. A quiet moment, then thunder crashes, sometimes booming, sometimes a gentle rolling type. Beautiful...
~Chelle~

Posted by Alisa Js on 02/05/07 at 08:44 PM

The skies here in Hawaii are indeed breath taking to behold and even more amazing when we have that 'special soul flame' with....*sigh*

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/07/07 at 02:13 PM

Rhonda, I love the way you have captured that sensation of the rain and the up and coming thunder in so few and gentle strokes of your pen.

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