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Lost Sight

by Razel Davies

Sitting on a pole
Laying on the grass
Our bodies are gone
Our time has past

Fires in the sky
Burning blinding light
Our time has come
We have lost our sight


Author's Note: First verse to an epic song. I'm working on the next verse now.

Posted on 01/31/2007
Copyright © 2021 Razel Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/01/07 at 12:50 AM

I like the rythm and flow of the words...can hear them as lyrics. Good start...be interested to see where it leads.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/01/07 at 02:47 AM

Yes, yes, do carry on....

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