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Lost Sight

by Razel Davies

Sitting on a pole
Laying on the grass
Our bodies are gone
Our time has past

Fires in the sky
Burning blinding light
Our time has come
We have lost our sight

01/31/2007

Author's Note: First verse to an epic song. I'm working on the next verse now.

Posted on 01/31/2007
Copyright © 2024 Razel Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/01/07 at 12:50 AM

I like the rythm and flow of the words...can hear them as lyrics. Good start...be interested to see where it leads.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/01/07 at 02:47 AM

Yes, yes, do carry on....

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