Come Back by Steve Baba Is there a reason why I Miss you so much? The leaves are turning Orange and red, fall Is here and I am still alone Without you, I sip my coffee and watch The fish swim back and Forth in the translucent Water, my heart beats slowly As it waits for you To come back to me. 01/26/2007 Posted on 01/26/2007 Copyright © 2024 Steve Baba Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/26/07 at 12:34 PM Such patient longing here. Posted by Katerina T Nix on 01/28/07 at 08:08 PM I really enjoyed this piece, Steve. I like how you've compared the boring everyday things that we do with the unstoppable yearning that one can feel for another. A nice juxtaposition here -Kat :) Posted by Alisa Js on 11/23/08 at 05:02 PM Aloha Steve, In this piece, you have captured well the essence of longing as the persona waits for his beloved. Well done. alisa ;-) Posted by Doreen Cavazza on 05/04/11 at 01:02 AM Haunting and sad. A piece that many can relate to--the feelings are clear here. Time has a different feel when we're waiting. I like this. Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/11/14 at 02:35 PM a beautiful notion, this poem, which leaves me to ponder, given it was written in 2007 if that love ever returned? Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)