| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/25/07 at 04:27 PM So creative from the perspective of the babe - "was a big row of grinning teeth that
had swallowed time's own wrinkles
and then hung them from the sky." Fantastic lines! +Fav. This just warms every bit of me.
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| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/27/07 at 03:41 AM Kristina beat me quoting her favorite lines. This so awesome. Going in my favorites too! Grandchildren have the greatest gift for making adults their mirrors! |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 01/30/07 at 02:24 AM Ah look in the future to see the past.
Look in the past to see the future.
Nice work Charlie. |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/27/12 at 08:58 PM I love it! |