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Martyr

by Maria Terezia Ferencz

cold are the waters of your soul
when you find your belief
will let you sink
your buoyancy never found
while kneeling in Church

dark are the windows of your soul
when the light goes out
a lamp never lit
by the fire you strived to find
within wooden walls
it did not exist

white are the lilies of your skin
not from purity
as you were promised
no fair flower you are blanched by death
never finding the eternal life
once promised

we all are stained with sin

01/21/2007

Author's Note: Inspired by one of my favorite paintings La Jeune Martyre (The Young Martyr) 1855 Paul Delaroche

Posted on 01/21/2007
Copyright © 2026 Maria Terezia Ferencz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/21/07 at 10:57 PM

I can see the inspiration. Very well done.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/22/07 at 12:11 AM

This is a difficult subject and you handled it well. "no fair flower you are blanched by death" - I particularly liked this line and this stanza. Your ending line provokes thought, but the whole poem makes me think back to past martyrs and to present ones - contrasts, reasons, martrydom forced on one and self induced. Thank you.

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