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by Charlie Morgan



the sun argues with the clouds,
and neither gives way; while,
we flounder with decisions
of being gloomy of giddy.

01/16/2007

Posted on 01/16/2007
Copyright © 2024 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/18/07 at 05:19 PM

I like this very much Charlie, especially personifying the sun and clouds...quite effective. An alternate sharper ending IMHO could be: while we flouder with the inability to choose 'tween gloomy and giddy.

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