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women for whom i should not be writing poems: i

by Brynn Dizack

the stillness of her body
reminded me of snow:
the pillow-white,
the pure

but these are not
traits of her body.

sassed,
maybe too old to wear
what it does,
the odd yellowed teeth
& short stature;

a life lived with
ink
forever on the body:

in the cuticles, or
just above the elbow
to the left.



01/12/2007

Author's Note: c.m.

Posted on 01/12/2007
Copyright © 2024 Brynn Dizack

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 01/16/07 at 11:23 PM

"a life lived with ink forever on the body:..." This is beautifully vivid and secretly sad. Nice work, Brynn.

Posted by Brian Fuchs on 02/19/09 at 10:26 PM

This is beautiful.

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