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[ january tenth ]

by Ava Blu

I crunched my car.

Just the back side of it.

No one involved, no one hurt;

just me, fumbling around,
wondering how I hit something so concrete
when my life is made of brick walls.

01/10/2007

Posted on 01/12/2007
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/12/07 at 03:45 PM

Ouch... I like this. Nice play on the brick walls and concrete idea.

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