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by Emily Davidson

it should be snowing but the weather has been
defying all the regulations and so it is january
and i am surrounded by rain and puddles and
dark, dark night i am driving slowly with
the fuzz of the radio like a lullaby and i am
thinking of how much i'd like to drive the 125 miles
to your house, just me, the radio, and the downpours
to keep each other company as i think how nice it'll be
to arrive at your door, 4am, the sun considering dawn
in a few hours and you considering how much you have
missed me although it was not so apparent until i decided to show up

01/08/2007

Posted on 01/08/2007
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/08/07 at 05:30 PM

It's driving me nuts, too.

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 01/11/07 at 05:17 PM

I like the flow of this poem. Somehow, the one- long-drawn-out-sentence of thoughts works perfectly well.

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