nude year by Peter Hsunow that you are naked
i can see the color of your mouth
slowing all my words to
the lowest vibrations of light,
plucked and pinned
to the quiet withering
of the calendar. 12/30/2006 Author's Note: for auld lang syne.
Posted on 12/31/2006 Copyright © 2025 Peter Hsu
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Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/31/06 at 03:42 PM This really resonates - I particularly like the words "plucked and pinned" - their out-loud sound plus the image they provide are very effective. |
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