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coffee and cigarettes
by Morgan D Hafelea steaming cup...
and another slow burn suicide
leaves me waiting
for times i won't have to hide
these dark secrets behind
my lying eyes... 12/28/2006 Author's Note: i don't remember where i first heard slow burn suicide so i can't give credit where credit is due... but i like the sound of it...
Posted on 12/28/2006
Copyright © 2024 Morgan D Hafele
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/28/06 at 11:50 PM As much as we may in some way enjoy those taboos, at the same time I'm sure all us coffee drinkers and smokers have thought these words to ourselves. Great capture Morgan! COUGH |
| Posted by Rowan Luis on 12/30/07 at 01:14 AM this rolls off the tongue well. why do they leave you waiting though? |
| Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 08/02/08 at 05:07 PM i like the sound of it as well. and too often i like the taste of it as well. |
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