| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/16/06 at 05:53 PM What really makes this poem tangible is the detail, "Snow angels in the winter/
And fires in the fall" that enriches the overall emotional concept and wistfulness--of a life once connected going on alone.
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| Posted by A. Paige White on 12/17/06 at 01:56 AM I envy the snow angel memories and the voice in this has a howl hidden behind it to me. Welcome to Pathetic! |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 12/17/06 at 02:24 PM Nice work. I love the imagery and and the dark undertone. Welcome to Pathetic!
--bf |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/15/07 at 01:40 AM Very little in life is constant. But I love this writing. Sometimes the memory will just never leave us. You have captured the moment well. Nice write! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/21/15 at 01:11 PM it is always for those who persist in holding onto love to wonder what ever became the one they loved and still do? to rue lost love is to hope its return. lovely ode. |