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Star Love

by Alisa Js


Love tiptoed over, leaving me a message
...never before had I been wooed

Delicately stroking my heart strings
...a melody ensued.

Couple of notes at first
...pretty soon a tune

A little bit later the chorus was added
...'fly me to the moon.'

Walking around in stardust
...can this really be?

Turning around, I see your smile
...as we soar through the galaxies.

One kiss from you and I'm on fire
...filled with sheer ecstasy and delight

You have made all my dreams come true
...for all my days and for every erotic night.

01/20/2005

Author's Note: one of my earlier ones...

Posted on 12/15/2006
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/16/06 at 02:48 PM

A very sweet poem indeed Alisa. I especially like the idea of slowly writing a song in the first few cuplets. One of the great things about poetry is that it never fails to amaze me in how two poems with the same title can be so different.

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