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Exit

by Alisa Js

empty soul
vacant eyes drying
spirit flies

06/30/2006

Author's Note: Senryu 3/5/3

Posted on 12/09/2006
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/10/06 at 01:54 PM

Powerful expression of mortal death, and spiritual migration.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 12/14/06 at 01:25 AM

I've seen that look and you describe it well.

Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/28/07 at 05:20 AM

Amazing how something sparse can contain so much. Great senryu!

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