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Riding the Next Starshine
by Amanda L Marrontrancing through the sky on worldly wings
passion gushes moondust
images of wild blossoms fashion an hypnotic encounter
with a belief in the sanctuary of incredible efflorescence 12/07/2006 Posted on 12/08/2006
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 12/08/06 at 05:03 PM Nice... love the second line |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 12/09/06 at 05:21 PM "trancing through the sky on worldly wings" ... I love your opening line, which led to beautiful imagery. This poem could even be added to with more effervescence. |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 12/12/06 at 03:34 AM if a poem had a dream of a poem having a dream, this would be it. abstract and whirling, this poem dances in its brevity. a whimsical number with sweet vocab and tons of open windows. good stuff a.m. |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 12/21/06 at 03:06 AM so enjoyable, i wish it was longer...wonderful! |
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