by Tony Young
Reach out and feel
its soft glow
its warm heart
so as to never
the love is strong
break its heart.
Author's Note: Just venting at an old friend
Posted on 12/04/2006
Copyright © 2023 Tony Young
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/04/06 at 04:41 AM|
I really like this. It's got a great style going for it.
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 12/04/06 at 11:21 AM|
Great vent- good rhythm. I would not like to be the target of this piece! The last line really packs a punch.
|Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/06/08 at 11:35 PM|
Venting is good, so is this poem. I love the ending.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/31/08 at 04:49 PM|
I like how you build up to that last line and how it gives a certain irony to the title. I'm sure we all can relate to this in our own way Tony. :o)