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Reach out

by Tony Young

Reach out and feel
it’s soft glow
and touch
it’s warm heart
then hold,
so as to never
let go.

Then when
you feel
the love is strong
never part,
reach out
break it’s heart.


Author's Note: Just venting at an old friend

Posted on 12/04/2006
Copyright © 2024 Tony Young

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/04/06 at 04:41 AM

I really like this. It's got a great style going for it.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 12/04/06 at 11:21 AM

Great vent- good rhythm. I would not like to be the target of this piece! The last line really packs a punch.

Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/06/08 at 11:35 PM

Venting is good, so is this poem. I love the ending.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/31/08 at 04:49 PM

I like how you build up to that last line and how it gives a certain irony to the title. I'm sure we all can relate to this in our own way Tony. :o)

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