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Reach out
by Tony YoungReach out and feel
its soft glow
and touch
its warm heart
then hold,
so as to never
let go.
Then when
you feel
the love is strong
enough
to
forever
never part,
reach out
break its heart.
12/03/2006
Author's Note: Just venting at an old friend
Posted on 12/04/2006
Copyright © 2024 Tony Young
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/04/06 at 04:41 AM I really like this. It's got a great style going for it. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 12/04/06 at 11:21 AM Great vent- good rhythm. I would not like to be the target of this piece! The last line really packs a punch. |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/06/08 at 11:35 PM Venting is good, so is this poem. I love the ending.
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/31/08 at 04:49 PM I like how you build up to that last line and how it gives a certain irony to the title. I'm sure we all can relate to this in our own way Tony. :o) |
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