| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/16/06 at 04:00 AM I like the way you play with "sayings" like "out on a limb" and "on a stake" instead of "at stake". I like the equation idea and the crosses (like x's= the unknown in the equation). The unknown-- where fear comes from... and also happiness (around the bend)? |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/17/06 at 11:15 PM Sweet mystery....maybe! Enjoyed this, Christel! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/18/06 at 04:48 AM Oh, I understand this so well. No need for apology, Christel, you have written a piece that exposes a vulnerability I'm sure many of us have. It's beautiful.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 11/19/06 at 01:45 AM Wonderful expression of the fear of intimacy! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/21/06 at 09:25 PM Fear is a strong emotion and you express it very well with your writing. In facing our own fear and knowing how it motivates us we can see how it effects our relationships with others...very well written. smh |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/23/06 at 07:50 PM Very well put...excellent ending! |
