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Everbreak
by Max BouilletI am the point of fracture
on a fissure spreading through glass.
Not about to break; not broken
--eternally breaking. 11/01/2006 Posted on 11/02/2006
Copyright © 2026 Max Bouillet
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 11/02/06 at 04:41 AM i love the combining of words into one, something i like to do on occasion myself, so i really dig it here in the title. the visual of the point of origin for glass cracks, whoa, i can SEE it, and i feel futility, resignation, endless purgatory. a dark and painful look at self-doubt. an earthquake. i can see and feel the faultlines. PK |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 11/02/06 at 05:20 AM This really says it all about the gradual destruction about one's self in body and spirit. A realistic approach to what will happen to all of us eventually. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/02/06 at 11:55 AM Sharp imagery, intense! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/02/06 at 04:03 PM Really excellent wording here - a very vivid picture emerges and yet I feel a whole different result. This speaks to me of our individual impact on life around us - from the moment we touch the glass everything we do, every word we speak ripples/fractures out forever. This is such an eloquent poem! Thank you! |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/05/06 at 04:50 PM Jesus. How come you're so f'ing good? I mean, I'm definitely not complaining... This is a great snap-shot, and I love the play on's. MAXIMUS! |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 11/03/07 at 07:54 PM like the classic Japanese/Chinese poetry, there is so much said in so few words here...what a gem to stumble across...and the ending is PRICELESS!! Loved reading this, I look forward to more...peace, jewels |
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