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october thirtieth

by Ava Blu



last year, my body was submerged in sand
and you were enjoying the sight of me being
uncomfortable.

10/30/2006

Posted on 11/01/2006
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/02/06 at 03:43 PM

Fascinating visual - effective ending. Makes me squirm in more ways than one.

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