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october thirtieth

by Ava Blu

last year, my body was submerged in sand
and you were enjoying the sight of me being
uncomfortable.



10/30/2006
Posted on 11/01/2006
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

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Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/02/06 at 03:43 PMFascinating visual - effective ending. Makes me squirm in more ways than one.

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