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August night

by Richard Trotter


Visions of elusive beauty
Provide no consolation
For my soul’s disunity
And its helpless isolation

For what is the value
Of red fragile flowers
When no ones beside you
To fill the empty hours?

And discontent is the cost
Of a sparkling August night
When it seems that all is lost
For the victims of daylight.

10/25/2006

Posted on 10/25/2006
Copyright © 2020 Richard Trotter

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Megan Langley on 10/26/06 at 09:23 PM

It rhymes so perfectly that it's extra powerful... The second and third stanza are so real and vivid to me... I really feel a connections with this poem ~Megan

Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/05/10 at 06:17 PM

Lovely and rhythmic; a lovely piece.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/06/10 at 02:39 AM

I enjoyed this very much - congrats on POTD!

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