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broken dreams

by Peter Humphreys

bright dawn
bright light
bright eyes
bright sight
bright prospects
brittle soul
broken dreams
brief encounters
bring me
back to
you

10/24/2006

Posted on 10/24/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/24/06 at 03:12 AM

Much unsaid here. I like the progression here very much and how you circle back to what I assume is someone solid in your life.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 10/24/06 at 09:42 PM

I like the way you seem to show how what we envision as a bright dream can lead to something less that leading us back to what we know. nice read. smh :)

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