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The Shock of It by Lisa Marie BrodskyIf she was a grown woman and saw it
she would have laughed,
flipped him off and walked away
but she was a child and had never seen it
just like shed never seen
a shark bite a person in half
and this scared her like that
and all she saw was the
red lumberjack shirt parting
the jeans slipping down,
it coming out like a snake
that would strangle her with
just a sight and he laughed
though she didnt know why
because she wanted to run,
get out of the jungle, but the shock of it
forced her to stand still
until he stepped closer and she felt
the ground shake her out of her shoes
as if an elephant had bore down
and she ran as fast as she could past
Mrs. Carters blueberry bushes,
to Pammys house out of breath, and told her
she had seen it and it was dark and thick
and she never wanted to see it again
and Pammy just laughed though she didnt know why,
though it was a safe neighborhood
and they were just eleven.
10/18/2006 Posted on 10/18/2006 Copyright © 2026 Lisa Marie Brodsky
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/19/06 at 01:36 AM I really like how you have created this disturbing scene in an ordinary sounding neighborhood. One never knows who the snake in the grass might be. |
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